Analysis of Pat on the earth.



As the cow shits on the earth,
The deity adorns its moos,
Cleansing then into the most
Beautiful sound that gently
Splattered on the ground
Holier than the cow's
Most tortured soul
In the depths of hell,
Reaching out to God
Trying to cry,
In a place so dank
It darkens the skies
Filling it with gods
Caress as it reaches out to
Spirit bleaching the body
Of the most beautiful water
On the planet of waist
Scrapped by the Deity
To lie in silence of clarity
For a chosen period of
Lasting love
To sweep the earth
With the fog of love.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 513
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 424
Words per stanza (avg) 103

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Dirty Earth.

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Written on September 26, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on September 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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