Analysis of Freedom

Janice Altschuler 1975 (New York)



Shattered completely broken
Without any words left to be spoken
What once was the innocence of a child
Has now become someone so jaded and dephiled
I am cover in ruin covered in shame
Most of all I am covered in blame
You abused me in every way
Yet I was the one that continued to stay
You said I couldn’t leave I wasn’t that strong
I finally left because I knew you were wrong


Scheme AABBCCDDEE
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1001010 0110111110 1110100101 1101111001 11100101001 111111001 101101001 11101101011 111111111 110010111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 375
Words 75
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 301
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Written on August 02, 2020

Submitted by janalt94 on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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