Analysis of Aftermath



From the aftermath of battle,
My comrades before me lay,
Defeated by the winds of change,
Soon to come a world so strange,
With a future cold and gray.

My sharpened blade, now dull with rust,
For here honor hath no meaning,
Greed takes the place of chivalry,
For men’s only vision is what he sees,
And what’s seen is for his taking.

Shining armor paints not the scene,
For men wears nature’s colors,
To survival’s laws they must abide,
And within the forest shadows hide,
For deadly are the arms of war.

Nations stands with thieves as kings,
The scrolls of peace immersed in dust,
Neighboring states, so worlds apart,
And hate is held within their hearts,
And their people hold no trust.

A world of fools, where cruelty rules,
Is fated for destruction,
How much more will Nature stand,
Of people ravishing the land,
Before retaliation.

I ask thee why I could not die,
Was I forsaken by the past?
Could I give up this broken shell,
And free my spirit from this hell,
To soar to Avalon at last.

But Hope, she calls, a silent voice,
That my being here hath meaning,
The world I knew would be again,
And to show her ways I must begin,
For time’s a wheel that’s turning.

My honor lost, is now restored,
For I was meant to take this path,
My blade now sharp, my armor bright,
With the hope once gone as now my light,
I walk the aftermath.


Scheme XABBA CDXXD XXEEX XCXXC XFGGF XHIIH XDXXD XJKKJ
Poetic Form Etheree  (33%)
Metre 1010110 110111 01010111 1110111 1010101 11011111 11101110 11011100 1110101111 00111110 10101101 1111010 1111101 00101011 11010111 1011111 01110101 10011101 01110111 0110111 01111101 1101010 1111101 11010001 010010 11111111 11010101 11111101 01110111 1111011 11110101 11101110 01111101 011011101 1101110 11011101 11111111 11111101 101111111 11010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,305
Words 250
Sentences 9
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5
Lines Amount 40
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 129
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Written on 1985

Submitted by Warbard on September 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Warbard

Poet & Philosopher, Soldier & Scholar, Warrior & Writer, Husband & Historian, Father & Freemason. Since the early '80s, Warbard has been a pen name for Shelby Chandler who is a historian and has made a home for his wife and four daughters in the area of Fredericksburg, Virginia. more…

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