Analysis of Transparency



Do you know, my Heart,
why I love autumn?
Just for this special scent with hundreds of shades.

Your smells,  the fog's smells,
the plums orchard smells,
the Italian village smells with its freshly baked bread, young wine, olives, starch napkins in the tavern and woolen coat,
that warms you on the porch.

Do you know, my Heart,
why I love autumn colors?
Just for a pastel calm, harmony, daily changes.
Autumn is like a beloved woman,
which you discover every day, every hour.
And these discoveries are so pleasing,
that you want to live forever
and believe in the illusory nature of time.

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 © Copyright: Valentin Luchenko, 2021


Scheme Axx bbxx Axxxcdcx xd
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11110 11110111011 11011 01101 0010101111011111011000100101 111101 11111 1111010 1100111001010 101100110 11010100110010 0101001110 11111010 0010001001011 1 1011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 618
Words 110
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 8, 2
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Written on September 20, 2021

Submitted by tinoluchenko on September 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Valentin Luchenko

I'm from Kyiv, Ukraine. Published 5 books of poetry. more…

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