Analysis of Cars to Mars



As the earth wanders
All through dark space
We sit here
In our rightful place

With big dreams
And a place called home
Some of us are angry
And others are alone

We drive ships and cars
Trying to find a way to mars
Because the earth is dying
Slowly and weak

I wonder what the world looked like
At its peak


Scheme XAXA XXXX BBXC XC
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 1111 111 010101 111 00111 111110 010101 11101 10110111 0101110 1001 11010111 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 290
Words 62
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 61
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

Written using three words, space, ship, and anger. Brought on thoughts of space and the future and the goals us. as humans are trying to accomplish.

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Written on September 17, 2021

Submitted by raven.online674 on September 23, 2021

Modified on March 17, 2023

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