Analysis of What's going on



What's going on
With my thoughts
That are coming out of my mind
So fast
I wish that I could stop my thoughts
From moving fast
I have no idea how to do that
I have different thoughts in my mind
Some dark thoughts that I don't like it
And some happy thoughts
I use the happy thoughts in my poems
The dark thoughts I discard down the chute
I must say that I enjoy being a poet
That is the job I do best
And I was chosen to be a poet
By my father
Also I write my poems every single day
For my father
I don't miss a day writing poems for my father
And also my father rewards for a well done job
Yes when the night comes I stop working
And I go to bed


Scheme ABCDBDECFBGHIJIKLKKMNO
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 111 11101111 11 11111111 1101 1110101111 111001011 11111111 01101 1101010110 011101101 111110110010 1101111 0111011010 1110 1011110100101 1110 1110110101110 0101100110111 110111110 01111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 624
Words 140
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 503
Words per stanza (avg) 140

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This is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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Written on September 22, 2021

Submitted by aldokraas039 on September 22, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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