Analysis of I cant live with out you

jody l cooke 2021 (north carolina)



you know that there so much hanging  on the line
with simple words  girl,  that I just cant find
of broken hearts  and wasted tears that flow
but with all these feeling,
 you know I just cant let you go  

walking down loves broken streets
you know I cant see beneath my feet
 am  I crying in vain
by calling  out your name

girl  you
know I cant live with out you
just look into my eyes  
 knowing you are my world  
 everything is about you
girl

you  know each time I see your face
its  takes me to a secret place  that chase away my
fears   longing to go back  
to  all those years  
hoping when I close  my
eyes that you will appear  
girl  you
know I cant live with out you
just look into my eyes  
 knowing you are my world  
 everything is about you
girl
 a poem by Jody Cooke copyrighted


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Poetic Form
Metre 11111110101 1101111111 1101010111 111110 11111111 1011101 111110111 111001 110111 11 1111111 110111 101111 101011 1 11111111 1111010111011 110111 1111 101111 111101 11 1111111 110111 101111 101011 1 0101101100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 777
Words 155
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 6, 13
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

simple words of feelings hanging on the line with a open heart .

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Submitted by mysticstarpublishing on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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jody l cooke

i was born in 1969 in north Carolina i m a writer poet artist and author i got my first book of poems out on the web called beneath the sands of time. i love poetry it is a great art for the soul. more…

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