Analysis of Fly
Fly, then fly, oh soul
Into the vast, starry night
Quickly you slip loose
From earthly anguish
What do your eyes see now then?
Can I imagine?
Can I be happy?
Are you finally at peace
Oh wandering soul?
Do I pray mercy?
Or do I pray for justice?
Am I that bitter?
You finally left
You were a thorn in our sides
And yet a rose too
When I see my faults
I see my need for mercy
I cannot condemn
So fly to heaven
Into light unimagined
Joy, peace and comfort
I remember you
I think of you often still
My little brother
Scheme | AXX XXB CXA CXD XXE XCX BXX EXD |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 0101101 10111 11010 1111111 11010 11110 1110011 11001 11110 1111110 11110 11001 10010101 01011 11111 1111110 11001 11110 011010 11010 10101 1111101 11010 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 492 |
Words | 105 |
Sentences | 8 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 24 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 50 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 13 |
About this poem
Regarding the afterlife of my brother, an alcoholic, who took his own life.
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Written on September 12, 2021
Submitted by gimpytoe on September 15, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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