Analysis of Fly



Fly, then fly, oh soul
Into the vast, starry night
Quickly you slip loose

From earthly anguish
What do your eyes see now then?
Can I imagine?

Can I be happy?
Are you finally at peace
Oh wandering soul?

Do I pray mercy?
Or do I pray for justice?
Am I that bitter?

You finally left
You were a thorn in our sides
And yet a rose too

When I see my faults
I see my need for mercy
I cannot condemn

So fly to heaven
Into light unimagined
Joy, peace and comfort

I remember you
I think of you often still
My little brother


Scheme AXX XXB CXA CXD XXE XCX BXX EXD
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 0101101 10111 11010 1111111 11010 11110 1110011 11001 11110 1111110 11110 11001 10010101 01011 11111 1111110 11001 11110 011010 11010 10101 1111101 11010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 492
Words 105
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 50
Words per stanza (avg) 13

About this poem

Regarding the afterlife of my brother, an alcoholic, who took his own life.

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Written on September 12, 2021

Submitted by gimpytoe on September 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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