Analysis of Neo Birthday

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)



Let one more slip by, alive
Despite the Pandemic
Even though I did survive
Don't need to feel apologetic

Calendar pages flipped by the wind
While the mirror image ages
Cakeless candles slowly dimmed
Faded vision hid internal rages


Scheme ABAB XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1111101 010010 1011101 11110010 100101101 10101010 110101 1010101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 223
Words 39
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 95
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Personal celebration

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Written on September 14, 2021

Submitted by jb809499 on September 14, 2021

Modified on April 29, 2023

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