Analysis of The spear and love



The spear and love
By :
Turkia Loucif

Translated
By:
Hassan Hegazy
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We built the house of love and opened it wide
We also entered a house we have not built or erected
The sleepless of night near us, by the way,
Is pleading to come in, but we left him out
*****
We accepted entertainment and bitterness
But for our sweet words we do not enjoy
We begged for the one who neglected us  
And who wanted to be near we blame and scold
*****
The hunting of the elusive deer is our aim
We hit the spear and hurt it in heart
So, take care of us and we will do the same
The spear has caught what we intended and want
*****


Scheme aBa cBd xcxx dxdx exex
Poetic Form
Metre 0101 1 11 010 1 011 1 11011101011 110100111111010 0101111101 11011011111 1 10100100100 11101111101 1110110101 01101111101 1 0101001011101 110101101 11111011101 01111101001 1
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 603
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 15
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 42

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This poem about life .

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Submitted by Hegazyhhh on September 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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