Analysis of With a serpent's end

Mark Cloutier 1972 (Kaneohe)



With a serpent's end
It is bitten by the head
As the tail spins
It flips over
Til it returns again
Then we leave
And as we return
We burn eternal
As lights and stars
Fall in the immense
Of darkness and the outer
Of a world within
That falls to its axis
And then begins
Without an end
With a word heard
In the corridors
And halls of darkness
As the light subsides
And the candle of time
Goes out in the night
As the future
Becomes the past
And we leave at last


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJDKLCAMNLOPQDRR
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1110101 1011 1110 110101 111 01101 11010 1101 10001 1100010 10101 111110 0101 0111 1011 00100 01110 10101 001011 11001 1010 0101 01111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 436
Words 95
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 24
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 364
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Written on June 14, 2021

Submitted by Markcloutier on September 10, 2021

Modified on March 09, 2023

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