Analysis of Water's Edge



standing near
the deepest part of
the water's edge,
and peering
into restless
sea, my life
searched for
perfection

so, I drank the
potion and slashed
my wrist and jumped
from the highest cliff,
to greet my own reflection


Scheme XXXXXXXA XXXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 101 01011 0101 010 0110 111 11 010 1110 1001 1101 10101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 219
Words 39
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 8, 5
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Written on September 08, 2021

Submitted by gregory_g on September 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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