Analysis of YOU FRIEND



You were my Friend'

'The Best' I ever had in the wOrld'

-YOU  it yOu' My Heart would have never leave'

Becouse 'In  You I found PEACE'

IN         YOU'     I     found COMFORT'

-When i'm Weak'

You Strengthen  my BONE's with JOY'

You   Touched    my HEART with  LOVE'

That       is        so    PURE   and  TRUE'

-You Cherished me in YOU &You Grant me this Chance

That i may  Live  in the Same wOrld

That  you  Lived and  LEFT'

Dearest YOU' YOU  FREIND'

YOU were friend of MINE                             

-YOU Friend'if  our MAKER  had too-much Time for Us,Together -YOU Friend'But you never Stay'

-As I  tought you  should've Stayed

-Than you were GONE'

Before I was able to recorgnise your FACE'

Without  your  Presence'

My Friend my LIFE was Taken to the  DARKNESS'

CRYING those SAD TEARS'becouse my safety NEST

Was Broken'Lefted with no HOPE'

To Hold my ShakinG TOMORROW'

When wORLD Hidden YOU'from my Eyes.

You Friend'in my Present you DISAPEARD.

Even  you Friend'That you Long Gone.to far World.

where we nolonger see EYE to EYE,

It okey,becouse you live within my HEART'

^YOU FRIEND -  YOU MINE^


Scheme A B X X X X X X X X B X X C X X X X X X X X X X A B X X C
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 011101001 1111111101 101111 011110 111 1101111 111111 111101 11010111111 11110011 11101 10111 10111 11110101111111111101 1111101 1101 0111101111 01110 11111101010 101111101 11111 1111001 11101111 11011011 1011111111 1111111 11110111 1111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,376
Words 191
Sentences 5
Stanzas 29
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 8

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You were FRIEND

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Written on September 08, 2021

Submitted by wisely on September 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nhlakanipho Wiseman Nhlenyama

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