Analysis of A country Betrayed



The moon shone brightly
The waves pondered gently
The stars blinked brilliantly
The night was wondrous.

The hills echoed out our laughter
The fields were green
Children played as the raindrops fell
Music filled the countryside.

Then the gumboots and khakis came through
The clouds covered the moon
The stars stopped blinking
The waves pondered wildly.

My hills no longer echo
The fields now are brown
No raindrops do I see
Gravestones stand in place of the children.


Scheme AAAX XXXX XXXA XXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 01110 011010 011100 01110 011011010 0101 1011011 101010 10101011 011001 01110 011010 1111010 01111 11111 11011010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 466
Words 78
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 96
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Written on January 2, 1984 as a 15 year old teenager, following a military coup in her home country Nigeria on December 31, 1983.

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Submitted by Mmoley on September 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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