Analysis of Manifest This!



This larder; so plain, no vision, unplastered.
Is filled with muck, shame; a disaster. Untoward words are spoken so clearly. Precarious thoughts appear so deeply. Rudimentary things are taken for granted. Radical things are rarely planted. A vision of such creates an image.
Commonly noted: Discrimage!

Power is privilege; it grows in rotation.
Poverty is laden.
Prejudice is hatred.
Scholar is wisdom.
Courage is war.
Prayer is heavenly.
So, Who is "Mockery" at the door?


Scheme ABB CCAXDXD
Poetic Form Etheree  (50%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 110111101 11111001000111101100100101110010011101101001110100101101110 100101 10110110010 100110 100110 10110 1011 11100 111100101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 478
Words 76
Sentences 15
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 3, 7
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 191
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Written on September 05, 1998

Submitted by 1mrstpayne on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Teddi Payne

Teddi has been writing poetry since the young age of twelve. Her poems stems from personal things she's endured from her childhood up to adulthood. She writes to inspire people in hopes that it connect to others as a healing process. There's more to come, so stay tuned! more…

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