Analysis of The King and the Naiad

Henry Abbey 1842 (Rondout ) – 1911 (New York)



When the wrongs of peace grow mighty,
They beget the wrong of war,
Whose wild night, with deeds immortal,
Sparkles brightly, star on star.

'O king, to health restore us;
We are besieged by thirst.
There are two foes before us;
The unseen foe is worst.
'Lest thirst's sharp arrows slaughter,
Yield to the open foe,
And lead us to the water,
Tho' it in thraldom flow.'

Thus to Soüs, King of Sparta,
With parched lips his soldiers cried,
When Arcadian besiegers
Hemmed them in on every side.
In the dry and stony stronghold
Was no dropp of water found;
But a brook, beyond the rampart,
Lightly danced along the ground.

Lofty Soüs bade a soulder
Wave a truce, and, with the foe,
Made a compact strong as granite,
With one rift where hope might grow.

Sparta will yield up her conquests,
She her claims to them will sink,
If her king and all his army
From the nearest fountain drink.

To these terms they made their pledges,
Whom dry thirst gave fearful odds,
And, to witness what they signed to,
Loudly called upon their gods.

In a deep, cool glen, appareled
In green boughs, which swayed above,
To the sunlight rose the waters,
Soft as eyes that beam with love.

Hither came the adversaries;
And the Spartans, as by whips,
Were ondriven to the kisses
Of the liquid Naiad lips.

As each fever-throated fighter,
Bending low his waving crest,
Stooped to quaff his land's dishonor,
Him the troubled king addressed:

'If thou wilt not drink, but conquer
This temptation of the spring,
I will give to thee my kingdom,
And thou shalt be crowned its king!'

Heedless of him were his soldiers;
Thirst they gave a higher rank;
By the choking captain maddened,
All, with panic faces, drank.

It appeared not heavy water,
But divine air, cool and thin,
Which they, freed from stifling torture,
Now were deeply breathing in.

Lastly stooped thirst-burdened Soüs
To the treason of the spring;
But he turned, and would not drink it,
Being absolutely king.

Rising, as his face he sprinkled,
With his men he marched away,
Scornful of the daunted captors
Who in vain might say him nay.

He would yield not up his conquests,
For himself and all his men
Had not drank the sparkling pleasure
That allured them to the glen.


Scheme ABXX CDCDEFEF XGCGXHAH BFXF IJAJ XKXK ALML XNXN EOEO EPXP MQAQ ERER XPXP XSMS ITET
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 1010111 11111010 1010111 1111011 110111 1111011 001111 1111010 110101 0111010 11011 11111110 1111101 11001 11011001 0010101 1111101 1010101 1010101 1011101 1010101 10101110 1111111 1011101 1011111 10101110 1010101 11111110 1111101 01101111 1010111 001111 0111101 1011010 1111111 1010100 001111 011010 101011 11101010 1011101 11111010 1010101 11111110 1010101 11111110 0111111 1110110 1110101 1010101 1110101 10111010 1011101 11111010 1010100 10111011 1010101 11101111 100101 10111110 1111101 10101010 1011111 1111111 1010111 11101010 1011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,125
Words 393
Sentences 17
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 8, 8, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 68
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by Nazetel on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:58 min read
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Henry Abbey

Henry Abbey (July 11, 1842 – June 7, 1911) was an American poet who is best remembered for the poem, "What do we plant when we plant a tree?" He is also known for "The Bedouin's Rebuke".  more…

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