Analysis of The Duet

Ella Wheeler Wilcox 1855 (Janesville) – 1919



I was smoking a cigarette;
Maud, my wife, and the tenor McKey
Were singing together a blithe duet,
And days it were better I should forget
    Came suddenly back to me,
Days when life seemed a gay masque ball
And to love and be loved as the sum of it all.

As they sang together the whole scene fled,
The room’s rich hangings, the sweet home air,
Stately Maud, with her proud blonde head,
And I seemed to see in her place instead
    A wealth of blue-black hair,
And a face, ah! your face, - yours, Lisette,
A face it were wiser I should forget.

We were back – well, no matter when or where,
But you remember, I know, Lisette,
I saw you, dainty, and debonnaire,
With the very same look you used to wear
    In the days I should forget.
And your lips, as red as the vintage we quaffed,
Were pearl-edged bumpers of wine when you laughed.

Two small slippers with big rosettes
Peeped out under your kilt-skirt there,
While we sat smoking our cigarettes
(Oh, I shall be dust when my heart forgets!)
    And singing that selfsame air;
And between the verses for interlude,
I kissed your throat, and your shoulders nude.

You were so full of a subtle fire,
You were so warm and so sweet, Lisette;
You were everything men admire,
And there were no fetters to make us tire;
    For you were – a pretty grisette.
    But you loved, as only such natures can,
With a love that makes heaven of hell for a man.
* * * *
They have ceased singing that old duet,
Stately Maud and the tenor McKey.
‘You are burning your coat with your cigarette,
And qu’avez-vous, dearest, your lids are wet, ’
    Maud says, as she leans o’er me.
And I smile, and lie to her, husband-wise,
‘Oh, it is nothing but smoke in my eyes.’


Scheme ABAABCC DEDDEAA EAEEAAX FEFFEGG HAXHAII ABAABJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 1110001 111001001 0100100101 0110101101 1100111 11110111 011011101111 1110100111 011100111 10110111 0111100101 011111 001111101 0110101101 1011110111 110101101 1111001 1010111111 0011101 01111101011 0111011111 11101111 11101111 111101001 1111111101 010111 001010110 111101101 1011101010 101101101 1010101 01011011110 1100101 1111101101 101111011101 1 111101101 101001001 1110111101 011101111 1111111 0110110101 1111011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,703
Words 320
Sentences 13
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7, 15
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 254
Words per stanza (avg) 63
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 20, 2023

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