Analysis of A broken heart
How can the person I love
Cause me so much pain,
How can he act like he dont care
And leave me in the rain.
How can he tell me he love me
But his actions don't show,
Why does it hurt so bad
I really need to know.
My heart hurts bad
And I cry at night,
Something has to change
This shit just ain't right.
How can I love him
And hate him at the same time,
How can I claim him
And tell people he's mine.
He act like I don't exist
Like im not even there,
Why don't he love me
This just isn't fair.
What have i done wrong
To make him act this way,
It's killing me to leave
But also killing me to stay.
I fell in love
With a man I thought loved me,
Only to find out
Our love wasn't meant to be.
Markisha s. Jones
August 31, 2021
| Scheme | ABCB DEFE FGXG HXHX XCDC XIXI ADXD XX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (30%) Tetractys (23%) |
| Metre | 1101011 11111 11111111 011001 11111111 111011 111111 110111 1111 01111 10111 11111 11111 0111011 11111 011011 1111101 111101 11111 11101 11111 111111 110111 11010111 1101 1011111 10111 10110111 111 10 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 696 |
| Words | 158 |
| Sentences | 9 |
| Stanzas | 8 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2 |
| Lines Amount | 30 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 68 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
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Written on August 31, 2021
Submitted by Markishajones83 on August 31, 2021
Modified on April 05, 2023
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