Analysis of My baby
I'm angry
I'm sad
Just maybe
I'm mad
You did me wrong
You know you did
I love you Tone
I'll have your kid
We laid up
Like a ladder
We caked up
I made batter
I spilled my milk
Inside of you
You fuckin milf
I was so into you
You lied to me
You smoke and dranked
With our baby
Oh you didn't even think
About how I would feel
Before you did what you done
My baby you killed
So you could have your fun
I was so happy
Regardless of people
You was so nasty
Retarded and a weak hoe
I was like biggie
I had suicidal thoughts
That you really loved me
Shit my heart you took and toss
Glad you out my life
Don't you ever try to hit me
Glad you not my wife
That ring wasn't cheap g
What goes around comes around
Like the moon when the sun down
We are forever done I'm thru
Thank you for listening I'm Tony Brown
| Scheme | ABABCDEDFGFGHIJIABAKLMNMAOAPAQARJAJASTIT |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (45%) Tetractys (43%) |
| Metre | 110 11 110 11 1111 1111 1111 1111 111 1010 111 1110 1111 0111 111 111011 1111 1101 11010 1110101 011111 0111111 11011 111111 11110 010110 11110 0100011 11110 110101 111011 1111101 11111 11101111 11111 111011 1101101 1011011 11010111 1111001101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 761 |
| Words | 171 |
| Sentences | 1 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 40 |
| Lines Amount | 40 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 15 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 619 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 171 |
About this poem
Long story short I got my childhood friend pregnant her grandfather and my mom was engaged to get married when we was little kids but they called it off then. Reunited with her on Facebook we got into a entanglement I got her pregnant if not the same day the very next day or 2 she posted on snapchat of her smoking and drinking and out partying when she took the test she wasnt pregnant anymore. Worried what her family and her last baby daddy would say and didn't want to t beat up by him of found out I got her pregnant. wouldnt been my first child yo.. more »
Written on August 30, 2021
Submitted by tbmoney2008.87 on August 30, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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