Analysis of My only wife



This line of mine is verily obtuse
from Edens garden my tail is loose
one has come where joyous tail
for never once will they fail
she is a burden the history is past
and the next will surly last
were we together as one
our kindred waste full son
the whole embrace of lights
who will win the delights
of where we go my surprise
as our son begins to rise

a trip throughout this land
all is one our vengeful hand  
this is complete of where to go
or else back to the deep dark hole
where you will never retreat
as a place for your great seat
to look down and judge
with a voice that will never budge
swollen tongue when silent
and straighten the bent
while all fall and gaze
the hells will light and blaze

is this really the end
my loyal and faithful friend
at our point of final demise
for the enemy told lies
of theft from the world
from which he dwelled
the sky is blackened frost
at such a gem of a cost
the sacrifice was not a wrong
while this is just a song
which I gave to you
to cheer you up from feeling blue


Scheme AABBCCDDEEFF GGXXHHIIXXJJ KKFFXXXXLLMM
Poetic Form
Metre 11111101 110101111 1111101 1101111 11010010011 0011101 0101011 1010111 010111 111001 1111101 11010111 010111 11110101 11011111 11110111 1111001 1011111 11101 10111101 101110 01001 11101 011101 111001 1100101 110111001 1010011 11101 1111 011101 1101101 0101101 111101 11111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 999
Words 207
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 12, 12, 12
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 269
Words per stanza (avg) 69
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Submitted by tommydavey on August 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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