Analysis of Summer Groom



A flower of gold how sweet you are,so colorful so vibrant as sweet as honeycomb.

Your eyes are as the blues off the tip of a mountain, or is it as blue as the oceans deep.

Is it winter or is it spring,who can tell,when there is a mist of love that curves your beautiful hands.

Now it is summer filled with life of gold, only the heavens can understand what this life of happiness, could unfold.

It lit up like a candle, like a flower it blooms, like a rabbit running through the meadow, oh my sweet summer groom.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01011111110011011110 11110110110101111110101 11101111111101111111001 1111011111100101011111100101 1111010101011101010101111101
Characters 511
Words 103
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 80
Words per line (avg) 20
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

I wrote this poem while at my 1st job when I was about 18 years old. It later awarded me "Poet of the year, @Poetry.com. That encouraged me to write a little bit more

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Written on January 06, 2009

Submitted by gelissayorke on August 25, 2021

Modified by gelissayorke on August 25, 2021

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Gelissa Yorke

I'm A Christian. I love the Lord. I love the arts. Former dancer, I love to read and I do enjoy writing from time to time. I love to laugh. I am from Jamaica. more…

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