Analysis of untitled 1



I sit sleepless in the summer nights warmed by the fire
 Bodhisattva
he keeps the dreamless flood of religion damned
its not Gods, but what men made for themselves
war is pure confusion
refuse heaped on the soul and senses
debilitating piles of garbage inherited from gone ones
I’m not confused by my search
im not confused by my existence
Im from the earth and dedicated to its poverty
i'm made from dirt haunted by my starvation of the senses  
all art is suffering
suffering is liberation in honesty
casting our woes into the fire
suffer and endure, refine and progress in ambition
abandon material relation give it all up
leave your home, leave your family, leave your girlfriend and your wife
leave the world embrace the earth


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJFKJAELBM
Poetic Form
Metre 11100010111010 1 1101110101 1111111101 111010 011101010 010011100100111 1101111 110111010 11010100011100 111110110101010 111100 10010100100 1010101010 1000101010010 01001000101111 11111100111011 1010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 716
Words 128
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 595
Words per stanza (avg) 128

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i think i was reading jack K

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Submitted by hunttuitasi on August 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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