Analysis of Lady

Brett Martin Smith 1958 (Fresno, California)



He moves slowly, cautiously, through worlds created by poets
Searching for words to paint the page. Oh, but to pen her is not easy
No, words, such simple words are not enough to paint her, yet he tries

He thinks of how she wafts across a reach
A dandelion seed in flight; A butterfly on the wing

Her hair cascades alike the flow of angel falls
Midnight, mystical, magical, as light then reflects the rosewood hue.

Her lips; full, soft and sensuous
What any man would not give if he could for one brief moment taste

Her eyes, green and deep and true, can mesmerize and captivate all
As they reveal the kindness of her spirit

He hopes, within the confines of mortal tongue
Somehow he's painted here an image
To describe this wonder of creation
This woman; This lady.

Copyright © 1997 Brett Martin Smith


Scheme XAX XX XX XX XX XXXA X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010011010110 10111101111101110 1111011101110111 1111110101 0100101010101 010101011101 110010011101011 01110100 1101111111111101 01101011100101 11010101010 1101011101 11101110 1011101010 110110 101101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 786
Words 146
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 91
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

I dated this woman named Connie for awhile - This poem is about her

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Submitted by brettsmith294 on August 24, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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