Analysis of Memories of another time



Memories of another time  .....

My memory stirs to take me back...to our home beside
                   the railroad track
where back and forth the shunter went...never seeming
                   to relent.
Empty box cars shunted in...to be filled with
                   coal....from....
                   the coal yard bin
the whistle blew...then clickety clack...it pushed the
                   cars along the track.
The coal yard was our frontal view...these sounds we
                   were accustomed  too.
to see and hear trains day and night...was no more to
                   us...than a familiar sight.
It was another era...another time...when we lived at
                  .old 69'.
the war had just ended, times were tough...what jobs
                  there were...didn't pay enough.
There was little money to be had...there were six of
                   us ,,,and Mom and Dad.
In winter, our only source of heat...was a wrought iron
                  stove to warm hands and feet.
our house was rented....in need of repair...but the land-
                  lady didn't seem to care.
Dad's job didn't pay a whole lot...Mom stretched the
                  the meager wages.,...he got.
passed down clothes from one sister to another.....
                 which were mended and altered by our busy
                              mother..
Groceries were charged at the corner store ....we were
                 clean and neat ....but we were poor.
somehow, it didn't seem that way...your only poor...if
                 you can't pay.
And we got by and learned to share...cause...love dwelt
                in that home there.
it enriched our lives in so many ways...to treasure and
               cherish all our days.
Our parents are gone now, we are grown....with homes
               and families of our own.
but always my mind still wanders back ...to that house
               beside... the railroad track.
written by me
Norma J. Suddard back in January 1997.


Scheme A XBXXXAXCBDEEXXXXFXXXXXGCXHDHHXFXXGXXXXXBDD
Poetic Form
Metre 10010101 11001111110101 011 110101110 101 10111001111 1 0111 01011110 10101 01111010111 00101 11011101111 100101 1101011111 1 0111101011 11101 111010111011 10101 01010101110110 111101 1011111101 1010111 1110101110 01011 11111101010 101001011010 10 100011010110 1011101 1110111101 111 011101111 0111 10110101101100 101101 10101111111 01001101 11111101111 01011 1011 101110100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,949
Words 293
Sentences 53
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 42
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 590
Words per stanza (avg) 136

About this poem

a true account of a memory stirred my imagination once again and I couldn't stop writing stories and my binders are filled to capacity with both. Many, many, many of my poems came out as a memory stirred my mind and my pen just wrote about growing up in small town. This is a true account of that time. Norma J. Suddard

Font size:
 

Written on January 21, 1997

Submitted by norma.suddard on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:29 min read
4

Norma Suddard

Previously wrote tons of poems. This is only one of so many poems that I couldn't stop writing. I would just imagine in my mind about something or see a piece of broken shard and out came a poem. I have so many, many poems and stories in my books --several binders of poetry, stories and thoughts. I have over 2 large binders of poetry and more than 8 binders on stories I have written. I just see something or think about something and out comes a poem or story. I have also done Ancestry since 2004. My binders take up hugh shelves on both stories and poems. I am in about 10 books of poetry alone never mind the stories. I love to write. Most of my poems are rhymes but there are others that tell a story. Norma J. Suddard more…

All Norma Suddard poems | Norma Suddard Books

1 fan

Discuss this Norma Suddard poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Memories of another time" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/107575/memories-of-another-time>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    1
    day
    4
    hours
    46
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    From which London landmark did Wordsworth celebrate the view in his poem beginning: "Earth has not any thing to show more fair..."
    A Waterloo Sunset
    B Westminster Bridge
    C The Tower of London
    D Hampstead Heath