Analysis of Freedoms Price



Freedoms Price
by R L Karlowsky

The thunder now silent, the flash is dim,  
men once standing, lay cold and grim.

The blade once shiny, now stained with wear, the meadow thick emerald, shown scarlet and bare.

Men of youth, no more burden to carry,  
puffed chests of pride, they will never marry.

Broken shadows, where brave men borne,  
a letter to home, unfinished and torn.

Once a mother's child, to hold no more,  
her hope and dreams, were off to war.

Entombed in the earth, a marker now stands, for freedoms price, a life it demands.

© R L Karlowsky 2008


Scheme XA BB X CC DD EE X A
Poetic Form
Metre 101 1111 0101100111 11101101 0111011110111011001 1111110110 1111111010 1011111 0101101001 101011111 01010111 0100101011110101101 111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 558
Words 102
Sentences 7
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 53
Words per stanza (avg) 13

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Of those who gave the greatest sacrifice.

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Submitted by RLKARL on August 21, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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R L KARLOWSKY

A retired adjunct professor with a strong desire for writing by inspiration. more…

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