Analysis of Broken Life



Why am i so stupid
Why am i so dumb
Why am i so fat
Why am i not loved
Would life be better
If i wasn't here
Would the others laugh and also cheer
Would anyone miss me
If i was gone
Would they dance and sing a song
Would they notice
Or even care
That these thoughts are hard to bare
I cant go on
And live like this
No one would care
And i wouldn't be missed
I give up
The pain is to hard
The words are in my head
And now i am scarred
This is what one believes
That is bullied everyday
Because they believe the lies
That other people say.
The bullying has to stop
We have to do our part
Treat others with respect
That is how we start.
Tell others they are beautiful
And that you really care
Show them love and kindness
So much they'll want to share
This will touch a life
And may change how one feels
Just with kind words
Because the mean ones can kill.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLLMNLOPQRQSTUTVWXWYLKLZ1 2 3
Poetic Form
Metre 111110 11111 11111 11111 11110 11101 101010101 11011 1111 1110101 1110 1101 1111111 1111 0111 1111 011011 111 01111 011011 01111 111101 1110101 0110101 110101 0100111 1111101 110101 11111 11011100 011101 111010 111111 11101 011111 1111 0101111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 818
Words 179
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 37
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 668
Words per stanza (avg) 179

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The effects than bullying can cause

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Submitted by Udawna on August 19, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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