Analysis of My julie

Abdullah Rizwan 2004 (Lahore)



It was julie who gave birth
to the poet inside of me,
Every poet needs a topic
for me I've got her as a key.

I'm kinda good with words
and i want her beauty to rhyme,
Poetic insomnia hits me hard
on her thoughts i waste my time.

And when i think of her
words fails to express her beauty,
But still i manage to gather some
"Your smile's wonderful my tutti-frutti"

Tell me what happened today
i wanna know about her life,
So i could have some knowledge of
her when she become my wife.

I still wanna tell her so much
but the people of planet are loveless,
Coming out of digital world for her
just so she know our love was a success.


Scheme XAXA XBCB DAXC XEXE XXDX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1110111 10100111 100101010 11110101 110111 01101011 0100100111 1011111 011110 11101010 111101101 111001101 1111001 11010101 11111101 0110111 11101011 1010110110 1011100110 11111011001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 620
Words 128
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 25

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About the best thing i ever had in life

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Written on March 11, 2021

Submitted by Icarusabd on August 17, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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