Analysis of On Daddy's Shoulders



On Daddy's Shoulders
Is my favorite place to be
I can see everything
I'm as high as can be
We walk through the park
It's so fun
Safe on Daddy's Shoulders
He holds on to me
No better place cause Daddy love me


Scheme ABCBDEABB
Poetic Form Nonet (56%)
Metre 11010 11100111 11110 111111 11101 111 111010 11111 110111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 199
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 161
Words per stanza (avg) 43

About this poem

About the feeling of a small child sitting safe ,high on the dad shoulders

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Written on August 16, 2021

Submitted on August 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobbie Natividad

Born in California and raised in California. more…

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