Analysis of Could Dreams Be Fair?
Dreams constantly put me into torment;
With its patterned wrathful repetition,
Like the repertoire of tragic drama,
Condemning the mere sight of pleasance
But with harsh struggles and hardships
Tearing me away into bits and pieces,
Bullets pierce, drowning me in bloody pools,
The scene gets filled with fetid gunpowder.
At times, dreams could be fair I feel, not aways
Yoking all retributions of the mankind on me,
Bathed in sweats, I lay painfully panicking.
I try rising for life, embracing hope in grip.
A witch stands with a deceiving chuckle
Casting brutal spell that paralyzes me
I stagger for survival, with a storming heart
As she quivers her nervy hands for a grab.
I ascertain myself for for these very dreams,
Awakening up to ward off the catastrophe.
I gain a euphoric state, drenched in sweats.
Respiting such heralding dreams of eventful fate,
I yearn for the pleasant ones that I long had.
If all nights be the repository of dreadful dreams,
I shall evade myself from even to doze off
To avert the mortification by heinous nightmares.
I shall pass the night with the ticking clock
That sings for me an unwindable melody of time.
When the world goes into slumbering snores,
I shall disregard to flinch my weighted eyes
Lest I die among these prejudiced dreams.
I wait for the relational fate to translate
The sequel of reprimanding hallucinations,
Into dungeon or death, I offer my endurance.
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Metre | 110011011 11101010 101011010 01001111 11110010 10101011010 1011010101 011111010 1111111111 111101111 10111100100 111011010101 0111001010 1010111001 110101010101 1110101101 1011111101 0100111100100 1100101101 11100110101 11101011111 1111001001101 11011110111 101011101 1110110101 11111110011 1011011001 1101111101 1110111001 111001001101 010110010 0110111101100 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 1,380 |
Words | 240 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 8, 8, 8, 8 |
Lines Amount | 32 |
Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 285 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 60 |
About this poem
Dreams are what they are related to daily events of life. Sometimes, they can be influenced by the external force of other's spell on the dreamer. They sometimes come in real life too.
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Written on August 12, 2021
Submitted by khachhabvaajraa on August 15, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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