Analysis of There’s A Story There



The story starts with a first date slow kiss, the kind that you always want to have in your list.
It leads into hot summer days catching rays Poolside
Holding hands in lounge chairs side by side
My favorite part is when the sun sets in her eyes, it just takes my breath away.
Babe, there’s a story there, and I feel it’s just underway.

I’m at the part where they are learning to dance,
All she needed was a deep breath and to take a chance,
Will she let him lead and sweep her off her feet?
A twist and slight turn, a flick of the wrist then another kiss as their eyes meet.
Oh my my, there’s a story there and it sounding so sweet.

She’s the one that he always craves
Sometimes it hits him hard like ocean waves
He sees the woman of his hearts desire
With every kiss taking him higher and higher

They seem to be working with the best recipe, sometimes it can feel a bit like a mystery. Sweet Blueberries and raspberries (with a bit of whipped cream).
Aw man, There’s a story there, and I think it’s about you and me.

The only axe that they have to grind is worth 8 points landing on the bullseye line, “who was closer, yours or mine?”
Check the scoreboard, it’s clear
It’s game point for the both of them,
A Winner take all Worldwide Premier

I wonder if the guy will finally get the girl.
Then they ride off into the sun and decide to give it a whirl…
No, because that’s so cliché and leaves so much opportunity to uncover
Babe uh, There’s a story there, and new worlds  to discover.

The leading man is a handsome one, or so its  told
And the leading lady with this commanding presence, beautiful and bold… Legs for days and a heart made of pure gold,

There’s a story there, and I love the way it’s being written


Scheme XAABB CCDDD EEFF XX XGXG HHFF II X
Poetic Form
Metre 010110111101111111011 110111011011 101011111 11001110110011111101 1101010111101 11011111011 1110101101101 11111010101 0101101101101011111 11110101011011 1011111 0111111101 11010111010 1100110110010 111110101100011110110100110010101111 1110101011101101 01011111111110101011110111 10111 11110111 010111101 1101011100101 111101010111101 101111011101001010 11101010111010 0101101011111 0010101101010100011110011111 101010110111010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,731
Words 334
Sentences 13
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 2, 4, 4, 2, 1
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 49
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 166
Words per stanza (avg) 42
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Written on July 20, 2021

Submitted by michaelc.72053 on August 13, 2021

Modified by michaelc.72053 on August 15, 2021

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