Analysis of CAN'T YOU HEAR ME



I'm crying, can't you hear me?
I'm all alone so sad.
It's so dark, I'm so afraid.
It hurts me oh so bad.

I'm crying, can't you hear me?
Mommy, I promise I'll be good.
Can't you love me just a little?
The way all Mommy's should?

I'm crying, can't you hear me?
Why don't you even care?
Don't you know I need you?...
Oh, God it's so unfair!

I'm crying, you can't hear me....
My screams are silent now..
I'm locked inside this nightmare...
My reality has become!


Scheme Abxb Acxc Adxd axdx
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1101111 110111 1111101 111111 1101111 10110111 11111010 011101 1101111 111101 111111 111101 1101111 111101 110111 110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 443
Words 89
Sentences 16
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 80
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Submitted by Sunni1313 on August 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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