Analysis of Mark's discounted machismo



Shotgun shell,
Siren’s song,
festering flesh wounds embrace,
Swallowed pills,
Mutilated lamb,
Such a wasted opportunity.

Pestilent itch,
Irreverent tone,
Foraging for entropy,
Rooting in familiarity,
A bit of sweet, musical nothing.

Weaponized codependency,
Recycled tunes,
Bone marrow engagements,
Pity, pity.
Cheetah print undies, tiny pseudo-penis,
Drowning in a stash as big as your head,
But you’ve got to pay the dealer back!


Scheme XXAXXB XXBBX AXXBXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 101 1001101 101 1001 10100100 11 01001 1001100 1000100 011110010 11 0101 110010 1010 1011101010 1000111111 111110101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 423
Words 63
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 7
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 115
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

Open to interpretation, though if you ask the Professor, he'll likely say it was an ode to the prideful drug addict, one whom forgets the true pity and despair of his reality for a few blissful moments...until he remembers.

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Written on April 12, 2018

Submitted by ProfessorDerg on August 10, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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