Analysis of Silence

Jose Lopez 1971 (San Juan)



Walking through the shadows
being trapped in the unknown
trying to see a light
who leads me toward a life.

Not finding a clue
why this is so dark, so mute?
I’m scared to think
where can I get through?

Nothing moves, no noise
floating in a space
imaging how’s life could be
when I get there.

Desperated to see that hope
my heart pumps so fast
the intuition guides me
where’s the sunshine?

Soon I can see a light
who rebirths my life
today I can say
I’m ALIVE!!

Jose Luis Lopez
Puerto Rico


Scheme XXAB CXXC XXDX XXDX ABXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101 1010001 101101 1110101 11001 1111111 1111 11111 10111 10001 1001111 1111 11111 11111 001011 101 111101 10111 01111 101 10110 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 474
Words 95
Sentences 7
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

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Written on June 10, 1980

Submitted by poetacristo47 on August 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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