Analysis of SEPTEMBER 11, 2001 (A JUSTIFIABLE ACT OF RETALIATION)



Three thousand dead in New York as
Two towers tumble to the ground,
Many more to die soon
As a holy war is sworn.

“You’re for us or against us!”
Is Junior Bush’s feeble chant,
So most nations in the world
Give vent to evil cant.

“We’re real nice people, gosh”
Is Junior Bush’s speech,
“Why don’t youse people like us?”
Is his feeble beseech.

Has he forgotten all of the evil
U.S. presidents have bestowed?
On Far and Middle Eastern lands
You reap what you shall sow.

From nineteen forty-eight to now
America sowed only evil,
Playing Monopoly with real lands
Sanctifying devils.

Rightful leaders were kidnapped
And imprisoned for three decades,
Evil Shahs were put into power
To uphold America’s oil enclave.

An evil empire arose
In Arabia’s darkest hour,
Rightful leaders were killed off
Maniacs put into power.

Three million?   Or three-hundred million
Arabs died along the way,
So, who can blame the Orient
For hating the U.S.A.?

So America’s need for oil
Could finally be sated,
The U.S. lied and killed and cheated
And rightfully is hated.

So when Junior asks
“Why hate us?   Hey, we’re real nice!”
Don’t give in to his trick
Of convenient short-sight.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XXXX ABXB XCAC DXEF FDEX XXGX XGXG XHXH XXII XXXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010111 11010101 101111 1010111 1111011 1101101 1110001 111101 011101 11011 1111011 111001 1101011010 110101 11010101 111111 11110111 010011010 100100111 110 101001 00101101 101010110 101010011 11010001 011010 1010011 1010110 110111010 1010101 1111010 1100111 10100111 1100110 01101010 0100110 11101 1111011 110111 101011 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,223
Words 218
Sentences 23
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 20

About this poem

Since 1948, America’s world policy has been a world-domination policy, playing Monopoly with real countries and real people. Tyrants like the Shah of Iran and Saddam Hussein have been put into power by the U.S., the Ayatollah Khomeini was kidnapped by the CIA and held illegally for 30 years! And the list goes on. So when Maddog Bush said on TV, “Geez we be nice, why don’t people like us!” frankly I did not know whether to laugh or cry. As Imran Khan said after the World Trade Tower disaster, the U. S.A. needs to find out why so many people world wide hate them and not just say, “Geez we be nice.” In fact the U.S.A. has been nothing short of monstrous in the way it has treated the Far and Middle East over the last seventy-plus years! 

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Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on August 04, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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