Analysis of be my home

Kashish Tomer 2003 (Delhi)



They frowned they judged
Felt bad, they had
Their imaginary grudge .

I smiled, I sang
Didn't give a damn
You by my side
My eyes now shine

I Don't have to look at you
Just through the phone
After all we're walking each other home


Scheme XXX XXXX XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1111 1111 101001 1111 10101 1111 1111 1111111 1101 1011101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 225
Words 45
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 3
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on March 21, 2021

Submitted on August 02, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kashish Tomer

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