Analysis of So You Wanna Get Started pt.1



As I lead off so softly,
Holding your hand as I pull,
Off to room of deep secret,
Where under passion comes you full,
Opening slowly the unknown door,
Of where sweet dreams become so real,
Bringing my lips upon your neck,
As on fall back ecstasy's being so filled,
Bringing apart each held connection,
As each point I receive a taste,
So sweet as lower comes closer,
And the cherry lifts to my face,
Going deeper as I give a feel,
Of tongue dipping under the button,
Bringing feel of breath under catch,
As my fingers give feel of just sudden,
I slowly pull of unzipping so smooth,
While kissing left inner curve by her lips,
Turning her round slowly unto the wall,
Giving sweet drive by my hand tween her hips,
Removing so delicately her pants,
As upon her back I just kiss,
And slide my tongue pon her curves,
Bringing the feel of without me she'd miss…

To be continued...


Scheme XAXAXBXXCXXXBCXCXDXDXEXE X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110 1011111 1111110 11010111 100100011 11110111 10110111 111111011 100111010 11110101 11110110 00101111 101011101 111010010 10111101 1110111110 11011111 1101101101 1001101001 1011111101 0101100001 10101111 0111101 1001101111 11010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 852
Words 163
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 24, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 342
Words per stanza (avg) 82

About this poem

Written on Sunday July 25, 2021 while on my way home after I left Rally's. I was thinking about this earlier and when I heard the song and music from Ride by SoMo, I had to just stop and write it. It is all about when I worked at Popeyes and Iesha was just rubbing on my butt trying to start something. And it came up in my head while we were on our way from church.

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Written on July 25, 2021

Submitted by mosesseiber on July 31, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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