Analysis of On cloud#9
On cloud#9
Look at how to seek,
For the life of me.
Whether going in and being,
See what is seeing.
Is it a gift?
Going swift, or utilizing a format, not to be laid down like a doormat.
To be revealed or concealed.
Which way of visions,
Spiritually gifted, uplifted with cloud #9.
| Scheme | ABCDDEFGHA |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Etheree (30%) Tetractys (20%) |
| Metre | 11 11111 10111 10100010 11110 1101 10111000111111101 1101101 11110 100001010011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 271 |
| Words | 54 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 10 |
| Lines Amount | 10 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 21 |
| Words per line (avg) | 5 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 213 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 54 |
About this poem
On cloud #9 looked at it as a spiritual gift. Wondered if I can grow out from being stiff? What unrelentless gift,on a swing, thinking things. As the world revolves and we guess whom is who? We go on a trip to find a better throne, a new approach to elevated places, to incubations. Going around all nations. To seek and find, the crossroads of seekers and none to deplete in. See just what is seeking .
Font size:
Written on July 30, 2021
Submitted by emprezz_e on July 30, 2021
Modified on April 20, 2023
- 16 sec read
- 3 Views
4 fans
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"On cloud#9" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/106069/on-cloud%239>.
Powered by CITE.ME
Discuss this Ameena Beyah poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In