Analysis of My prayer



Life is unfair.
I am not there,
Where you need me the most.
Distance is hurting
We are still flirting,
Talking but never been close.

Virus is cruel.
Please, win this duel!
Save me by saving yourself!
I am not near
To say: my dear,
Kiss you to make you feel well.

I hate this distance!
All my existence’
Longing to be by your side.
Please, just recover,
My future lover,
Partner, best friend and life guide.


Scheme AAXBBX CCXDDX EEFGGF
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 1111 111101 10110 11110 1011011 10110 11110 1111001 1111 1111 1111111 11110 11010 1011111 11010 11010 1011011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 393
Words 77
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted by hb on July 29, 2021

Modified by hb on July 29, 2021

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