Analysis of " I WANT TO LIVE



" I WANT to  LIVE " SHE said to me crying in screams and yells as  her best girlfriend KILLED  her  dead.  Sue i scream over again at Jill why did  you   ' F '  and sleep with my best girlfriernd lover.  AS my blood hits walls and runs  down  steps  Sue keeps  STABBING  a long blade in side me. I am  trying to  tell her am sorry  each  STAB of a 6 " Knife She has my black lines runs in a sweet girl name Jill tonight at a party  on a beach at a sea  side.  Sue she was drunk and  high i CRY  oh  Mama just turned 17 and yes am cold and i died . SWEET GIRL name Jill long blond hair and skinny ass RED lips on i think  now had a LIFE  floating up in star skies. THAT  BITCH  Sue over me to stand up kicked me slap my pretty face and  still left in me a bloody YELLED and scream ing early morning  i want to live but DAM  everyone  now am dead.


Scheme A
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111110010110111011111001111111011111101111101111110011011111011011011101111111001111011010101101111110111110110111011111111101011111111011010111111011111111101011010101011101011111110111
Characters 860
Words 179
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
Lines Amount 1
Letters per line (avg) 633
Words per line (avg) 213
Letters per stanza (avg) 633
Words per stanza (avg) 213

About this poem

LIFE and dying

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Written on February 13, 1999

Submitted by vamelvis on July 27, 2021

Modified on March 09, 2023

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