Analysis of Life



Living life day by day,
It’s crazy, what can I say.
The things we do,
The things we say,
The things we choose,
The things that may.
It’s hard to manage,
But we’ll be ok.
All we need to do is pray.
Ask God to guide us and be with us everyday.
The struggles in life we go through in every way.
We all deserve good things in life,
One day I pray that I can make this girl my wife.
She knows who she is, I hope she knows I love her for life.
I think it may scare her cuz it’s so real,
She been hurt bad and doesn’t know how to feel.
I try my best to show her I’m foreal,
But she can’t give me her all cuz I know how she feel.
I compromise with her on how she feels,
Cuz my love for her, Its just to strong and real.
I may get hurt in the end,
But that’s my consequence cuz I can’t just be friends.
Why do I do this to myself?
It’s all cuz how I felt.
I love her so much it’s hard for me,
I wanna see her happy and succeed.
Sometimes I feel like I forced her in this relationship,
Cuz she wasn’t truly ready for me,
But I wasn’t tryna make her feel like that, I hope she really sees.
She seems so happy to know I’m here for her,
She is now proud and calls me her girl.
My mind is thinking a million things,
It’s kinda fucked up how life makes you think.
This is the end of part of my life story,
Sorry and I hope it wasn’t boring.
I haven’t wrote poetry in a long time,
So forgive me, as u can tell I’m trying to rhyme.


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Poetic Form
Metre 101111 1101111 0111 0111 0111 0111 11110 11111 1111111 111110111101 0100111101001 11011101 111111111111 11111111111011 1111101111 1111011111 111111011 1111101111111 110101111 11110111101 1111001 111100111111 1111111 111111 110111111 1101010001 0111111001010 111101011 111110111111101 11110111110 111101101 111100101 1101111111 11011111110 100111110 1111000011 1011111111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,414
Words 304
Sentences 20
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 37
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,051
Words per stanza (avg) 304
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Written on July 25, 2021

Submitted by MikiS9108 on July 26, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Miki Santiago

Inspired by life, emotions, relationship, friends.. I’m not an expert just writing from my feelings.. Not sure if it’s good just wanna share and get feedback on my poems.. Looking for support from other poets and people who love poetry. more…

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