Analysis of The days of my Voyage



The days of my voyage!
Extraordinary gals
Spectacular places,
Diversity and races

I traveled for months
Got fascinated at once
In a time of isolation
In a place formed by other people’s imagination

I met some travelers on my way
We had some fun with a hey!
Talking and playing
Messing and breaking

I met a naughty man of my race
We are trying to solve a maze
He is so funny and cool
He is the clown of us all

The basics I have learned
But later on, I got dismayed
The mess some had done,
I got fixed and be gone

On my separation journey,
Some joined me
We met a man of a different race
With a different phase

We joined him in his walk
Got friends and more to talk
Sharing and caring
Giving and taking

The man of a different race,
Got all of us amazed
He is fantastic
and turns into gold the tragic

There is also a mysterious lady
Who somehow became my buddy
She is so cool
sometimes, she doesn’t care at all

In this voyage with other creations,
We found a fruit that I want every summer vacations
There is a man who became a dog
Weird but it’s funny though

Some love barbecues
Some, anything can do
Some will give you roses
I prepare ice creams for all causes

There is a gentle businessman
A leader who kinda cool
People who likes to cry
Person who always send food pics to tease

They are so many to describe at once
You'll need one whole day to read
One thing for sure!
I love them all!

Busy busy busy
Tirey tirey tirey
Funny funny funny
Crazy crazy crazy

The mysterious lady has the same pace
with the man of a different race
but whether you’re naughty or nice
Somethings can happen twice

Sharing and caring
Giving and taking
Talking and playing
Breaking and fading

Some things make you go silent,
Some makes you show your talents!
My voyage is a mixed
Until next time, hope it’ll be fixed!

For those who'll continue their journey,
For those who's a meany,
For those who had stopped the voyage,
All I can wish is Bon Voyage!


Scheme axbb xcdd eeFf ghij xxdx kkgh llFF gxmm kkij nnxx xxxb xixx cxxj kkkk ggoo FFFf xxpp kkaa
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 011110 01001 010010 0100010 11011 110011 0011010 0011110100010 111100111 1111101 10010 10010 110101111 11101101 1111001 1101111 010111 11011101 01111 111011 1101010 111 1101101001 101001 111011 110111 10010 10010 01101001 111101 11010 01011010 11100010010 1101110 1111 0111111 0110110010 110111110010010 110110101 111101 1110 11011 111110 101111110 1101010 0101101 101111 101111111 1111010111 1111111 1111 1111 101010 101010 101010 101010 00100101011 101101001 11011011 11101 10010 10010 10010 10010 1111110 1111110 110101 01111111 111010110 111010 11111010 11111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,865
Words 372
Sentences 7
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 72
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 85
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

The days of my Voyage is a poem written to commemorate the days of the author's journey. This is written with some symbolisms.

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Written on July 24, 2021

Submitted by Maepail on July 24, 2021

Modified by Maepail on September 27, 2021

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The poet is a writes poems to express her feelings and point of view about certain things. The poet prefers to write poems to honor some memories of her life and to share her lessons learned in life. more…

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