Analysis of The Mask I Wear



Though my problems I can't truly explain.
I constructed these walls to hide my pains
to replace the countless tears I cried.
Now all my tears remain dried.

I WEAR A MASK for each problem I face.
So people never see a hint or trace
of the difficulties and sorrows, I hide.
Those things I keep buried inside.

I wear the mask even though it's not real.
For it is the only way I'm able to deal
with the way, people act towards me.
I just pretend to always be happy.

Sometimes it hurts to get through a day.
If I don't respond then I'm not sure what to say
I struggle with the pains in everything I do.
Please understand I still appreciate you.


Scheme XXAA BBAA CCDD EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 1110111001 1010111111 11010111 1111011 1101111011 1101010111 10100001011 11111001 1101101111 111010111011 101101011 110111110 011111101 111011111111 11010101011 101110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 624
Words 125
Sentences 12
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 124
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

I wrote this poem as a review of my I wear a mask poem. To show changes and differences between that original and to when I wrote this one. Showing a differen way of saying the same thing but also show changes that may have come along.

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Written on October 26, 2017

Submitted by BJHollywood-Cutts on July 20, 2021

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Bonnie Hollywood-Cutts

I write about life in its various facets and events and experiences or memories. Sometimes for other people to remember something or someone and to capture the moments creating memories within words more…

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