Analysis of LIFE'S STORMS
A gray-haired man near fifty-two
Is staggering through the storms of life,
He's given up on dreams of success
Now he merely struggles to survive.
Without real help from parliament
He tries to struggle on alone,
A lonely man without a family
He's forced to get by on his own.
An invalid on a paltry pension
He struggles to even pay his rent,
Through he has to report to CentreLink
He gets no real help from the government.
Life's storms have nearly broken him
But still he somehow struggles on,
Although he no longer dares to dream
And all his hopes are surely gone.
Life's storms can break the strongest man
The way they've nearly broken this one,
But somehow he'll keep struggling on
Until his final day has come.
He wonders on alone and lonely
The end of life he hopes is near
Since nothing ever warms his life,
And nothing more can bring him cheer.
The storms of life have broken him
He staggers on in resignation,
Resentful of his very life
A life without expectations.
Still, he cannot take his life
His preacher says it is a crime,
So he staggers through every day
Just seeing out his time.
THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | XAXX BCDC EXXB FGXX XEGX DHAH FEAX AIXI XXX |
---|---|
Poetic Form | Tetractys (23%) |
Metre | 01111101 110010111 110111101 111010101 01111100 11110101 0101010100 11111111 1100101010 110110111 11110111 1111110100 11110101 1111101 11110111 01111101 11110101 011101011 11111001 01110111 110101010 01111111 11010111 01011111 01111101 11010010 01011101 0101010 1110111 11011101 111011001 110111 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,135 |
Words | 212 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 103 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
Another poem about the down and out.
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Written on 2008
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 15, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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