Analysis of RESCUE MY SOUL



Rescue My Soul
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rugged tears that swallow   every bit of me
telling secrets past hidden
now untimely persecuted           in the shadows painting
peoples' minds, pushing me                                                   nto a black corner of the world
where no escape                       will ever be evident
my tears may be strong
but the soul of me is weak
rescue me rescue me
show me the light                      out of this dark trap
lead me to peace
away from the concious war      of my life's trials
let my secrets now die
so I may live
rescue me rescue me
so I may be exonerated
letting tears weaken and fade
and the soul in me be rescued

Jacob Paul Fongemie


Scheme x axxxxxxAxxxxxAxxx a
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1011 1 101110100111 1010110 101010000110 10110110110101 11011101100 11111 1011111 101101 110111111 1111 01101111110 111011 1111 101101 11110100 1011001 00101110 1011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 664
Words 112
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 19, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 225
Words per stanza (avg) 111
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Written on November 26, 2002

Submitted by jpf_poetryman on July 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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