Analysis of Mera haal ki lekar khabar nahi jata_|arun_khatauli



Mere haal ki lekar khabar nahi jata
Tere mulk tak mera kabootar nahi jata

Sarhado.n par masle itne uljhe hue hain
Iss paar se koi parinda udhar nahi jata

Tere sang baithna hai tujhse baat bhi karni hai
Afsos hai ke tere kaandhe tak sar nahi jata

Tere jism se moti naa koi tod le kambakht
Bas yahi mere dil se ek darr nahi jata

Iss ped ki chhanv mein rehna hai tab tak
Toot kar ek-ek patta iska bikhar nahi jata

January se aakar teri aas mein baitha hai
Mere kamre se uthkar december nahi jata

Ye jaankar ke sarhado.n par maara maari hai
Mere talwo.n ko chhod ke safar nahi jata

Yeh kahani yun hi chalti jab talak
Is kahani ka qatib mar nahi jata

- Arun Khatauli


Scheme AA XA BA AA CA BA BA CA X
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1111111 1111111 11111111 111111111 111111111 1111011101 1101111111 111111111 111111111 10011101111 111101011 11111111 11111111 1111111 1111111 11
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 645
Words 133
Sentences 4
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 59
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted by arunkhatauli on July 12, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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