Analysis of Scorpio

klime kovaceski 1960 (Ohrid)



Screwing the squeeze of a punk "legends"
Honestly, it was never my intention
We did it in an empty wedding chapel
A fantasy of her imagination

She is sought after and popular
Because of her bright personality
She was serious, honest and caring
When asking about my nationality

Demanding yet endearing,
Daring me to look in her eyes
Not just at her gifted body,
And its' amazingly perfect size

Her smile made me feel comfortable
She talked about being a Scorpio
I'm slow, but I tried to comprehend
While reaching under her skirt below

Inside she's probably quite lonely
She dreams of a girl and a boy,
My family makes boys only
She was constantly grabbing my toy

Maybe she was Steve Jones's mate
Or maybe Daniel Ash's girl,
I know she isn't around anymore
As she glides through her new social swirl


Scheme XABA XCDC DECE BFXF CGCG XHXH
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 100110110 10011101010 11101101010 0100100010 111100100 011010100 1110010010 1100110100 0101010 10111001 11101010 010100011 011111000 110110010 11111101 110100101 011100110 11101001 11001110 111001011 10111101 1101011 111100101 111101101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 784
Words 144
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 24

About this poem

Las Vegas 2005

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Written on September 11, 2005

Submitted by kovaceski on July 08, 2021

Modified on April 25, 2023

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