Analysis of Whispers in the wind



The secrets of the universe whisper
In the ear of anyone who’ll listen
Will it be you will it be me
They dance in the message
Losing their self and their belongings
But did they hear the message
Did you hear it
It throws tantrums and roof tops at us
It weeps so hard we can barely stand
Did you feel it’s desperation
It’s scream full of determination
But who will hear his plea
Will it be you or will it be me
One day the message will get through
And that special person will be in awe
One day the storm will make sense
But
Will it be you or will it be me


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Poetic Form
Metre 010101010 001110110 11111111 110010 101101010 1111010 1111 111001111 111111101 1111010 11110010 111111 111111111 11010111 0110101101 1101111 1 111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 554
Words 115
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 438
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted by Lakeyahg01 on July 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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