Analysis of A LIFE IS LOST IN FOOTSCRAY



A man has died in Footscray
Late spring, one lonely night
And as he died the world laughed on
Indifferent to his plight.

For through no real fault of his own
His life had sunk too low,
And with a knife, he slashed his wrists
And away his life did flow.

Then Sunday when his sister called
She found a note to warn,
To not go in his bedroom for
His life had passed that dawn.

So, yet another life is lost
To indifference and to avarice,
And except by his sister, Denise
His life will not be missed.

For the man had barely any friends
And but two outside his family clan,
So who would mourn or even care
‘Bout the loss of this unloved man.

For lonely people die in fear
Terrified to die alone,
But a man whom no-one really liked
Could only die upon his own.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB CDXD XXAX XXXX XEAE ACXC XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 111101 01110111 010111 11111111 111111 01011111 0011111 1111101 110111 1110111 111111 11010111 1010001100 001111001 111111 101110101 0111111001 11111101 10111011 11010101 101101 101111101 11010111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 803
Words 160
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

About depression, loneliness, and the modern growth area: suicide.

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Written on October 16, 2008

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on July 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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