Analysis of Pain of seperation

Afsina afi 2001 (Kalamassery)



No tears for my eyes,
All have turned to ice..
I see all are weeping
I dont know why
But my dad still sleeping 
 
  He lies there on ground 
  With a white shroud around....
  I loved him more than
  Anything in my life
  I speak to him,
  But never replaid to me.....
  Oh god what happend?

Its very paining
This seperation i cant...
He never gets a rest in life
Now,let him take a long rest
Let him sleep....
Let him sleep forever


Scheme XXAXA BBXCXXB AXCXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111 111110 1111 111110 1 11111 101101 11111 10011 1111 110111 1111 1101 1111 11010101 111011 111 111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 447
Words 69
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 13, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

This poem is said about the conection between father and daughter.life is too short.At some point ,you have to realize that somepeople can stay in your heart.But not in your life....

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Written on July 04, 2021

Submitted by afsina670 on July 04, 2021

Modified on March 27, 2023

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