Analysis of School Day Mornings
I can hear my mother calling
up the stairs impatiently,
she is trying hard to coax me
out of bed, with toast and tea,
but you see, this is a morning
that I'm meant to go to school,
and I don't quite understand why
It's the hardest morn of all...
to get up bright and early,
with a smile upon my face,
and thank the sun for waking me
with such panache and grace.
So i don't! I hold my pillow
pressed down over my ears and try..
to pretend i haven't heard
my mothers desperate cry.
"You're going to be late my boy,
you simply have to rush!
you need to comb your hair my dear
and your teeth they need a brush".
I lay in bed quite motionless
pretending I'm asleep,
how much longer can i stay here
before I'm in trouble deep?
Eventually I drag myself
out of my cozy bed,
"I'm coming" I call out to Mum,
"Heard that before" She said.
So I'm up, I use the bathroom
and stuff my breakfast fast,
and give my mum a little kiss
as i run quickly past.
I bound out of the front door
and meet up with my mates,
we can hear the school bell ringing
as we fly in through the gates.
So i made it! only just,
but the thing I find so cruel,
is that I only feel so tired
on the mornings I have school.
For if it were a Saturday
they'd really be no fuss,
because (for some strange reason,
that i really can not suss)
I wake up before anyone,
with a smile all white and pearly,
and then my mothers shouting,
"Back to bed, its far too early"!
(c) Linda Faith Hurren
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Metre | 11111010 1010100 11101111 1111101 11111010 1111111 0111011 1010111 1111010 1010111 01011101 110101 11111110 11101101 1011101 110101 11011111 110111 11111111 0111101 11011100 010101 11101111 0110101 01000111 111101 11011111 110111 1111101 011101 01110101 111101 1111011 011111 11101110 1110101 1111101 10111110 111101110 1010111 11100100 110111 0111110 1110111 1110110 10111010 0111010 11111110 11011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,435 |
Words | 297 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 48, 1 |
Lines Amount | 49 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 560 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 147 |
About this poem
I often use poetry as a vent for emotions felt..........This was one of those times! I wrote this poem from the point of view of my son, in an attempt to understand how he might be feeling.
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